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Simon enchants women's breasts to grow based on their distance from the center of a nightclub.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 3.67
Eddie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not up to the quality of the first Simon story, and meanspirited. English needs work. For instance, defiantly means angrily opposed, not definitely.
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It's an alright story, though I didn't find it as humourous as the first.
Mephistofun
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This doesn't need stronger characters, it gives just enough to get the control idea going and set the trap. One of my favourates.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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