The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Eliot Cayne
Unknown
Sex Droid
Intelligent robotic girl finds her creator unwilling to have sex.
Average Scores:
 BB47
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Too short.  Good, but Not enough story to get off.
 grotto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
This story is a gem.  I read it back when it appeared on the BEA and couldn't stop fantasizing about it for a month.  It's short, but just long enough to sketch a nice portrait of the two main characters.  The BE is done very well even though it's only a few sentences.
 be
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
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