The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Adrian Burns
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Santa's List
A daughter begins getting nasty as she grows huge breasts, so Santa gives Mom a little help...
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jimjam451
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
pretty good
Smash591
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Whoever wrote this is probably a Romance Novelist. The writing style is engaging, the character development caught me off guard. I could relate to the characters and their situation and The BE description level, while not overly verbose is adequate for the story. I really enjoyed the story and even though I read it in parts, I was drawn back by an anticipation for what was next.

Very well written.
Thanks for a good read.

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