The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sofa King
Queen Of The Flies
Stranded on a deserted island, a group find themselves being transformed by a mysterious beast.
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

Unpleasant. Not very well written. But there are some good ideas there. Try again!

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

A very horrible mockery of the Lord of the Flies. The writing was atrocious, difficult to follow and no coherancy, the characters were so two dimensional they were almost one dimensional.

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