The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

David Johnson
Poppin' Mama
To save a remote colony, a woman undergoes a ""fast multiple pregnancy"" procedure.
Average Scores:

Above Ground Pools
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

Cool:) I would say say it exploded my brain..!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Great story. I hope that a sequel's on the way.

Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good short story, especially the Sci Fi part about it. Sort of a left hanging feeling at the end. Wish it were a bit more at the end.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

did it have to end

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

yum! More please

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Quite a good story.

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