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Evil demon gets revenge on tribe of amazons by making their breasts grow to inhuman proportions.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.33
Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
It's only a couple pages long, and I think it's one of the best short stories I've read here. The oddball sizes and characters in the breast sizes were a bit confusing, but the idea of how immense they were was still conveyed. Now we need some more stories since they're now in pursuit of the necromancer.
BIGboss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
it would be a lot better if there were some good quality illustrations to go with it.Except that it was 1 of the best stories i ever read
Thunderchild
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent. Still hoping for a sequel
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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