The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Two girls fighting for the same guy; one gets jealous and puts a curse on the other, who then finds herself in trouble with the law.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Best BE-Story i´ve ever red. She dont want it, she dont know how at first, it´s against her will and it dont happens too fast. Just how i like it.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great story

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I just love revenge stories!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Truly great, even better than the story of the same name. Your writing talent is incredible.

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