The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kiba Dachi
Passing The Mantle
Kelly summons Aphrodite and gains the power to transform sexually.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Some of the best BE detail ive seen, just discovered this one in the archive, what a lucky find!

Keep up the good work!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Fun and not too drawn out me says.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Great overall story, you need more detail mabey a page or two in length and it would be perfect. I also just found it on the archives, I think it is a great story please create a second.

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