The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mr. B
A subliminal-tape breast-expansion experiment goes a little too far...
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Very excellent, nice pacing, well-written. The characters are not developed, but the growth is very well documented and nice visuals accompany the story. The breast growth is very large but also moves slowly and allows for believability. Thoroughly enjoyable, a nice length.

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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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