The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sir Render
Nursing Bra
Jessica gets a magical nursing bra with spectacular results.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Interesting. The magic bit was kinda unexplained, though.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

A very intense and well-written story. The growth could have persisted, though, but I guess that's why there was a cliffhanger.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A fairly good story all-round.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very nice...I always enjoy this story and come back to it again and again

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