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The Overflowing Bra

Nosey Parker
Nosey Parker's big sister experiments with enlargement cream.
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The Archivist
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

A run of the mill, wholy uninspired BE story. While the set-up is interesting and the lead-up is good, the author did not spend much time on the BE. It would have benefited by being longer and having an appropriate ending.

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