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The Overflowing Bra

Niteowl
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Night, The
Dawn brings home a vial to help her and her friend's figures, but gets more than they both bargained for.
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 DarkHeart
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
Try writing an actual story sometime, this was way to scant on everything, from BE description to plot, to characterization. 
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