The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A scientist attempts to use nanobots to regrow a cow's udder, but an accident causes a human test...
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Not bad.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

far too short.

Evil Eye
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Weak story, but i've gotten off to it too many times to give it an overly bad rating... So, here you go. Solid 3. Enjoy- I know I did...

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