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The Overflowing Bra

Master PC: Two To Tango
Richard Tango gets his hands on the Master PC program.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Wow! That was a really great story, thanks for sharing fella!
I'd just thought I would comment here, seeing as no one else has, as this is one fantastic story! I hope you right more stories in the future. Good Luck in your writing, I hope they are all as good as this one

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