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The daughter of Lynnae and Paul Jarvis encounters the sloven Bigguns on her walkabout. Will she endure the pressure placed on her to become one of the Bigguns' bubble bunnies? Read the story to find out! Police Blue #35. (7/99) Now with new colored pics! (9/2000)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
vash
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Dude I am sorry nobody likes your stories but I find them very entertaining I hope one day you will write more
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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