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A magic-user casts a spell on a woman in a hotel lobby.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Huwawa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall a great story. Just the right length. I do really like the dialogue method of telling the story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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