The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

WishizX
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Little Sister
Little sister is so jealous of her sibling's boyfriend that she makes them both grow impossibly huge.
Average Scores:
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
An okay story with unfortunately very little character background history.
 2good4u
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5 
good story, wish it could be longer
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