The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Inflate123
inflate123@airytales.net
Liquid Helium
A scientist has his girlfriend drink some liquid helium -- and it expands.
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 John
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Well written, the description is vivid and easy to understand, a well-done piece.
 Helium
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Fantastic.... now, if only it was set outdoors; would have been fun for that helium to give her a really floating experience!
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