After his relationship with girlfriend Sara reaches a new level, Chad finds himself in a sex shop where he buys a teal strap-on for her. Sara loves it and what was supposed to just be some fooling around becomes a life changing experience for them both.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
HotSoda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
You know, this story didn't even focus all that much on BE but I don't mind in the slightest because it pushes just about every single one of my buttons. I'm big into futa and growth stuff in general. The plot is weird, but that's normal for this website.
The pacing of the whole thing is great; I never felt like it lingered too long on one point. The descriptions of the transformations were just detailed enough without being so long that they take away from the overall story. Could have gone into a little more detail on the big, hefty boobs though , especially when they're growing all the way past your elbows. ;)
I agree that the plot was a bit thin, but that doesn't really bother me in stories like this as long as it's sexy~! Still, I'll put in my two cents on what I thought of the plot. I enjoyed the idea of a mysterious shop appearing out of nowhere and selling them magic stuff. What is strange to me is the girlfriend suggested that she did something to trigger their transformations, but she wasn't the one who bought the dildo! How is it all connected? Will the plot holes be filled in the sequel?
holy shit accidental hole filling pun
Anyways, I love basically every fetish in this thing and I would absolutely read more by this author. tenouttaten.
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really awesome and well written story! It's nice to see such good TG writing from a new author theres never enough around here!
B T
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Overall a good story. Warning, slight spoilers included in this review. Unfortunately, it didn't do a whole lot for me and I love being pegged. It did seem a bit rushed/short and the logic at some points of the story didn't flow smoothly, like how he got the strap on in the first place or how being a futa would fix her family issues. The overall theme that the guy had to be continually reassured that he wasn't gay, killed the mood a bit too. The author describes how society frowns upon exploring sexuality, then reinforces the old stereotype that gay is a negative thing.
KD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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