The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

MsTFDFA
Anxious For Control
After an anxiety attack lands her in the hospital, Carol Crews finds relief while working out during recovery. She continues to go to the gym after the fact, anxiety fading as she grew stronger. But when working out stops showing results, Carol begins to feel her anxiety clawing back. When an opportunity to outgrow her plateau presents itself, she finds herself making a decision to pursue mental stability...
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like it, the BE was kinda not there but otherwise a good read.  Looking forward to reading any future sequels. 
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The breast expansion wasn't that important, which is why it got 3. I did like the character she had, and the writing was some of the best I've seen. I would have liked to see more muscle, use of muscle and her new dick, maybe some thought about what it was for a woman to have a penis, and perhaps more use of it. Like, perhaps, her going outside naked or near-naked and lifting a car above her head. An icon of a new kind of sexuality and body consciousness. 
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