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The Overflowing Bra

Chimerian
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Lipo
Trying to please her boyfriend, a woman goes in for a new form of liposuction that removes the fat from practically everywhere - with unexpected results.
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Aleksandar
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

I got my navel pierced at 18 years old. Had it for 4 years now. I have never once rteeetgrd it. On that same note, I researched all of the local studios and types of metal before having it done. It cost me $80 altogether. I also was very religious about caring for my piercing. More often than not, people don't follow the steps that the piercing artist will advise. So then it gets all infected, disgusting, unhealthy, and ends up falling out even if it's done professionally. Make sure you clean it with water, soap, and then soak it in sea salt water. But make sure it's not iodized. I also have 1 tattoo and 3 ear piercings. Never had an infection or problems with any of my body modification. Just be careful to pick something that you can remove yourself If it needs to be removed surgically (like some of the strange and intense piercing styles out there) to be honest those seem to be too complex and not worth the health risk. Same with genital piercings. Ouch!

ThreePointOneFour
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well-thought-out and well-presented.

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