2nd in a series of fantasies or dreams I have had. Please comment with feedback. I am sharing these stories to grow as a writer. Any and all feedback is appreciated. I hope you all enjoy.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.00
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I enjoyed the story but there are several places that could be improved. If you have an email account (throwaway is fine) I would like to send my comments.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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