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In a world where a bovine-fueled illness has become commonplace, what happens when one cow aficionado becomes a little too invested in the flu?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.29
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.07
- Technical: 4.29
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Sig
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good read, but one thing nagged at the back of my mind. If the men turn into cowgirls and the women turn into cowgirls....who do the cowgirls fuck??
Accursed
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
One wonders why it's a zipped 1 MB rtf file which only has 35k of text.
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome. Only drawback is now I want In-n-Out.
Miss Lany
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
It's a nice premise. The descriptions can be a little repetitive, not offering much variety to the transformation beyond the acknowledgement of how much growth is happening, but it's an alright amount for a story of this length.
I should note the first several pages read like an In'n'Out commercial, which was hilariously distracting. BioYuGi, were you perhaps hungry when writing this?
BBBobbi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories I have ever read, the only thing wrong is there is not more.
Baen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Xodin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Awesome story. A bit more description could be given to the growth and body parts. There was good description in there, but it was sometimes brief, little more than a sentence or two, but what you did have was good.
I greatly look forward to seeing the consequences of this situation, especially with an eye to see how the flu of this severity might affect naturally born girls :)
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, just perfect I cannot wait to see more stories in the future!
Dark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it! Wonder what happens to the new cowgirls next.
anonymoose
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Exceptional all around. Intense, right into the action, epitome of what a short intense story should be. Also, love the cowgirl thing, not too common around here!
boobfetishes
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
please provide a different format! I would looooove to read this but my phone cannot bring up .rtf files properly!
PeterBE
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was a lot of fun. I wish it were longer! Good descriptions (wish they were longer, too!), fun development, technically well done. Definitely need to see more from this author, hopefully something longer. Nice work!
TheFwank
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fuuuuuuuuu this was hot. The reckless abandon with which the characters pursue their growth is nothing short of sublime.
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