The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Leprechaun Wishes
A wish to be attractive has unexpected consequences for a clever young man.
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 Will It Work
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
A well done story, fairly good plot.  Some of the reactions are a stretch, bu tit is quite funny to read the section with stripper choices.  The story (and its sequel are very moralistic... Was that intenfded?)
Overall, good work.
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
A fairly good story. Well done.
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