In the same universe as the previous Lucy series, this is the story of Rebecca and her friends in a world where drinking bimbofying milk is normal.
Critiques and criticism are welcome as always.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
No complaints here! I loved everything! Please write more.
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was an excellent story with a great premise and it was written well. The only complaint I could really level against it is that I would like more in depth descriptions of the BE and just more of it in general. Looking forward to see more in this setting.
Gardamuse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Straight to the point and easy to read thanks to good grammar and spelling. I have not read everything so I can hardly give a full review, but I like this!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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