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Chapter Two. Reality changes again as a lady remembers the peak of her sexual awakening.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.25
majmage
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Good story, but paragraphs are important.
Genesis
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great second chapter, would like more BE but hoping that is to come :)
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am greedy for more! So what would happen if, say, he gets rescued from some absurd situation by Supergirl who is longing for a penis and a man strong enough to survive her mighty Kryptonian vagina? Or a lipstick lesbian? Or darker things, like perhaps Harley Quinn who is pinning away for the Joker? Can his mind and body survive? Can he change back? Would he want to?
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good stuff. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
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