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Cleaned up some spelling errors. This is my first try. I hope you enjoy it. There are several more chapters to follow. Subsequent chapters will include some gender changes.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
drayer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
you're a good writer. different styles of dialect. a good sense of time and place. all five stories together are very impressive.
Genesis
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Story, cant wait for more
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That was frickin awesome and could have some interesting plot developments in addition to being amazing stroke potential. Don't stop!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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