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The Overflowing Bra

The Gift Chapter 1 My Husband Knows My Name
Cleaned up some spelling errors.  This is my first try.  I hope you enjoy it.  There are several more chapters to follow.  Subsequent chapters will include some gender changes.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

you're a good writer. different styles of dialect. a good sense of time and place. all five stories together are very impressive.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great Story, cant wait for more

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

That was frickin awesome and could have some interesting plot developments in addition to being amazing stroke potential. Don't stop!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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