The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

I Promised I Wouldn't Cum
Milk, milk, sex, milk, sex, and a bit of BE.  The lactation-expansion is throughout, but there's a bit more BE in part III (all three parts are in this file.)
This is also about resisting one's orgasm, slightly non-consensual forcing the guy to cum, plus MF, MFF, and MFFF.  Hope you like it!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good quality writing and detailed descriptions. Not much BE however, but hopefully that will change in the next instalment?

Chris yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You're a great story teller. I enjoyed it enough to rate it :p very excellent

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 2

Fun story,great detail. But the capitals are distracting. Also when breaking the fourth wall. :(

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Good characters, good scenes. Nicely done.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very fun. Loved the bit of BE...the characters and all the milky goodness

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