The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A Boob Transfusion: Vol. 1
A science nerd and a sexy classmate's science fair project trigger a scientific breakthrough that will have unintended consequences later. This is the opening act and a slow burn as far as the actual growth is concerned. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

The technical aspects of your writing are 100% spot on.

The story itself is kinda... just not erotic at all... I mean it's a GOOD story, but I just can't fap to this, ya know?

Too much off stage stuff... and just when you're getting to the good stuff, we fast forward 3 months?

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

nice introduction. Hope to read the following episode soon.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

where's the depth

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


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