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A short (1327 words) .docx story with a warp/morph inserted. I claim no ownership of the original photo.
Jim is hired to watch his neighbor for the evening.
It soon becomes a bigger deal than he expected.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 5.00
Gugi gugi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It seriously makes my week every time I see you post a story. You're far and away my favorite author of the genre. Thank you for your continued service to the community.
Che
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It's a great start to a very enticing story. Good tease for sure. How about a followup story?
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
What a delightful tease! More they cry more!
NO21
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
So much potential for an excellent story, so little words and content.
Please expand your story!
Blush
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I'd love to see more. It left me wanting to see the process and the conclusion. There aren't enough busty growing amazons in this world.
deus
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A good start, too bad that it doesn't go on any longer.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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