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My first story
Caleb is stuck in solitary confinement, what will he do to pass the time?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.75
- BE: 1.75
- Characters: 1.50
- Technical: 2.00
Unamused
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Richard Lustig
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I'm taking som points off this story due to its lack of length, but nontheless i enjoyed the story at its core. I particulary liked the hourglass transformation (nice with some attention to the lower regions)but the story could have gone more indeph on her behavioral transformation. The prisoner in isolation plot does not really contribute much to the story, although it is certainly an interesting aproach. I think this story has good fundations but I'm rating it it low due to it's shortness.
kek
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
this story is just topkek
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is very odd.
Our main character is in prison for being a pdeophile (even if he says it's all a big misunderstanding) and the actual story is a fantasy of his where a housewife gets her tits and waist inflated by two asian racial stereotypes at a massage parlor. And it's only three pages.
Just... weird.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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