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A group of friends try out a new game and find it's much more amusing than Monopoly.
A fun little self-indulgent story with next to no plot I threw together for fun while working on parts for a much bigger story I'm working on!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.63
- Characters: 4.79
- Technical: 4.68
Outfitbank
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really good. I think more descriptions of bodies, but the characters were fun.
Geth460
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like this style of changes and shinanugins. Hope more like it comes soon.
Mukul
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have always loved your stories and this is also amazing
deracore
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
majmage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, please keep writing!
Chris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the best series I've ever read. I can't wait to read more, each one has had unique and awesome scenarios that keep it fresh and entertaining.
Dave
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Story! I can't wait for another with this game!
DirtyDan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Guy Incognito
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I have to say, THOROUGHLY enjoyed this story. I think technically there were some spots that could have used a little beefing up in the descriptors (sometimes I felt a little lost as to who was speaking/acting). Otherwise...HOLY SHIT KEEP EM COMING! ...poor choice of words? Haha
Ddpsoya
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it, I really hope you do another round of sorts. Keep up the good work!
Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
What an amazing story! Thank you for creating it and sharing it.
mirjirj
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great work! A very satisfying read from start to finish. While technically not centered around BE, this story greatly benefits from the balanced variety of kinky stuff it offers. Sometimes the auther got the names of his own characters wrong, which was hillarious.
PeterBE
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
A really fun read. Technically and grammatically excellent. I would have enjoyed longer descriptions of the changes, and more sex, so I look forward to your promised upcoming work!
Fan!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pitch perfect and simply a phenomenal story. Keep it up!
Garrison
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The "Game that transforms everyone" is one of my favorite genres of stories here. Excellent work
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Loved this story. Liked the fact that the characters were friendly but still snarking at one another. I can see a sequel in the works.
aguy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was the best story I've read on here in a while, in terms of, err, the reasons I come on this site in the first place. Seriously, please keep at it.
Afan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Heyo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Codex was a great story and this is great too! Please keep writing!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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