Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.20
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
Che
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A fun short story, just enough to raise interest.
JJM75
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
5 points for writing. Well done on your mastery of English!
The story itself is too short, and the BE is lacking.
Maybe add some lactation?
meh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
This was not horrible.... not in the sense that you should be banned from earth for uploading it.... maybe thrown in a pit and made fun of for a while.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent short story! Keep em coming!
Tieryn
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I just realized I forgot to add the description. I'm sorry guys, I suck. Anyway, it's about an archaeologist and her student. In a ruined temple, she discovers the cost of failing a puzzle that guards the temple's treasure.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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