Chapter 17, which features Erica and Beth enjoying a cum bath as well as more transformations and expansion! Also included are all previous chapters for those who are downloading for the first time.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic Story! If this doesn't get you hot, then you are just on the wrong story archive. When I first got into this story, years ago, I was inspired by the idea of a Female Futa Protagonist. After reading these again, I really love how hot this whole idea is, especially all the concentration on PE as well as BE. My only beef, which still doesn't stop me from giving all 5's on this one.. I like when there are limitations in a story structure that force the characters to not be Omnipotent or Super Powerful. The main character in this story suddenly becomes able to do things that should have only happened through sperm or milk the mechanism of the changes started out as biochemicalmagic.. but then changed into straight magic. But I get why the author did it and it did make the story very exciting.. and there was a bit of limitations still placed on the physical attributes of the main character.. at least until she figured out how to get around that.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some of my most favorite stories ever. Really hits all the right notes when it comes to what makes this kind of stuff exciting. Looking forward to many more of these!
TheDuff
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely please continue posting this work here!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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