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The Overflowing Bra

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Fantastic Desire ch4 part 1
The ring of desire has transformed Derrick into a lustful satyr and his girlfriend Kay into a sex-crazed nymph. Kay though, had always dreamed of being a fairy, and becoming a horny nymph, while lots of fun, isn't quite what she was after. Derrick is beginning to catch on to the way the ring works however, and resolves to remedy Kay's dilemma, but can a randy satyr really manipulate the ring of desire without things going a little askew? Of course not! Not when he loves her breasts growing so much!

And then, just when Kay and Derrick are becoming comfortable in their new forms, the mischievous Fae in them strikes, and the decide to have some fun by giving the ring to a pair of college girls they run into. What new and excitingly sexy forms lie in store for our newest characters? Whatever they are, they're going to be a lot hornier and curvier than they were before they put the ring on!

I split the final chapter into two parts since it ended up being so long! Enoy!
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a great addition to the previous stories and I cannot wait to read more. I particularly liked the way this chapter played around with different kinds of transformation and hope future chapters play this aspect up with even more types!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I haven't read the previous part to this series, mainly because my main interest is boobs' in the 'huge' category. However, I love Kay's early transformation into a fairy with breasts that hung down to her knees and how she was attempting to hump Derrick's tree-like penis and titty fuck him at the same time. I like extreme sizes, and the idea of a character being mobile with breasts that large isn't something I often see in any stories in English.

Naturally, I was saddened when Kay's breasts were reduced to a less prodigious size, but Wendy's transformation almost made up for it; I like fat breasts, thighs, and butts on an otherwise slim figure with soft-pregnant-looking bellies that don't have any stretch marks or outies, and I'm looking forward to what kind of fantasy race creature she will become. Though I prefer the humanoid types like fairies and nymphs; if they become more animalistic, my preference is if's constrained to just ears and tails; Japanese-style kemonomimi (animal ears) versus Western-style furry.

In any case, thank you for the good chapter. It's of a high enough quality that I think I'll enjoy reading it again.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The extreme forms are pretty exciting. Only thing I wish for is more sex with the extreme forms :)

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