Venus, goddess of lust, is slowly dieing from lack of worshipers. In desperation she creates a preistess to act as a new source of energy, but things don't go exactly as planned. Katie is a high junior with a sex addiction, and the target
of Venus's desperate attempt to save herself.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 3.92
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.08
Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Jim
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That was hot! We want more!!
Moar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please write more!!! MOAR :D :D
Val
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Lot of smarts in that pogints!
Loved It
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
@Anonymiss
I know what you talking about. The best stories are the ones where boobs give power to the girl. Power may corrupt her or not.
I personally love when girl turns into a mean girl as a result of breast growth.
Thanks for the story. It's awesome!
Anonymiss
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
This story is very dark but still very, very sexy. It also reminds me of my all-time favorite, The Blessing of Aphrodite, especially with the Roman god connection. It could use some proofreading and more descriptiveness, but I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Gep Gep
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It has some spelling errores but I want to read how thw main character develops. Keep the good job!
Aloucious
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Needs more BE description to be on the BE site here, also like Ryan said, proofreading is a must! Have someone else read your work, there's lots of folks on the forums willing to help. Spelling errors and grammatical problems really pull you out of the mood/story.
brit
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
great work, keep it up! Wish these were a bit longer. Would be nice to have some more description of breath growth. Doe sit happen all at once? Or as the belly is absorbed? How about her nipples?
Van Der Velden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Wow, man! This is probably the best story I've ever read. Please write more! I love the way her breasts grow and I can't wait to see how her character will change because of the body. :) BEST 5 ***** !!!
Ryan Peterson
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
It honestly seems like you didn't even bother proofreading this. I'm happy that you want to contribute to such a community but for the good of the people, at least read over this thing once. Simple errors made this unreadable too quick into the story
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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