Vanessa hates being so small up top, and none of those special creams or herbal supplements help to give her the size she wants. However, things change when a friend introduces her to a strange woman who flies around town with her umbrella, granting boob-related wishes. It's going to be one weird night for Vanessa and her brother ...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 4.80
semaphore1
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent style. I enjoy the TG and BE aspect. I was a little confused with some of your descriptions, but I really appreciate your writing style and use of unique phrases.
Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am leaving all fives to not lower your score at all....
Would it be possable to make a .rtf version of this story? I am legally blind, and I have special software to read these lovely stories to me, but .pdf files aren't compatible with my software. I would be happy to review your story if you did. At the very least, thanks for considering.
OpaiLopai
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This was a good read. I think it could have been 2 parts though - perhaps the same start up and then just following what happens to the girl for the first part and then have a sequel that focuses on the boy. The transformation descriptions were pretty good , it was just missing a little bit of back story ? It's very close to fantastic stuff here.
Miss Lany
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
This story was fun. Overall it felt like there was little justification for any of the transformations. They just happen for no reason other than Mary Bigguns just happening to show up. Other than that though, they were descriptive and entertaining enough and definitely get the job done. I'm especially a sucker for pleasurable transformations, so that was one of the finest BE scenes I've read in a while.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this story since I have a male-to-female transgender, shrinking, breast expansion, lactation, and lesbian fetish. Particularly if the male character becomes extremely petite (below 150cm tall) with thunder thighs, wide hips, and massive soft, boobs that continue to slowly grow as they dominate and overflow the real estate of the chest (huge category) without any personality death.
You mentioned to check out your Kindle Store page, and I did, but you have way too many short works on there that it's daunting to check each and every one to see if its contents have tags that appeal to me, and you haven't written anything else on Overflowing Bra, so I don't know if you wrote anything else similar to what you posted that would appeal to my above fetishes, or if this is a first or sub interest for you in your writing. If you did more like this, especially with the male character becoming short and super busty with details of their cup-size and over bust measurements—I'm a numbers freak—I would love recommendations!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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