It's day two of women transforming into busty beauties and just when Mark thinks he is finally getting used to his new world, things take an unexpected turn.
NOTE: Includes a revised version of Part I as well.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.89
- Technical: 5.00
Hi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall very very well written. I ask for more
Damnati0n
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it i hope to read more from you in the future
ktmgo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it!! Love altered reality
Browser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Genuinely well written. Your skills as a writer have definitely improved.
Vez'Roth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've waited so long for the completion of this story and it was not a disappointment. I loved where it went to and still come back to it regularly.
Spartacus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely a fan, and this I just as great as the first one. I do find one major flaw, as said before, where can I get a ring like this?!?!?!?
Hope you keep writing for the community.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fantastic stuff here. My only complaint is I can't find a ring to do this to me in real life!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This long-awaited follow-up was worth the wait! Excellent reality-altering transformations, and the sex scenes aren't bad, either.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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