The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Hunter S. Creek
"Hey Guys"
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You should seriously consider selling ebooks or something, man. Your stories rule!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

All Hunter S. Creek stories are in the top tier of quality.

Won't you join me in latching onto this glimmer of hope that Hunter returns to longer form writing?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Da king... Has returned

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I keep coming back to TOB hoping for stories this good. HSC is among the best and I'm glad to see he's back, even if only for a quickie.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Readers who demand wham-bam breast growth and descriptions of sexual situations probably will not appreciate this short and thoughtful story by Hunter S. Creek. But I certainly did.

I was pleasantly surprised by this story for three reasons.
1) It has been a long time (over ten years) since Hunter S. Creek has shared a story on-line.
2) The story was very short compared to his prior work and it included a warp/morph picture of the principal character.
3) I was not surprised that the story was well-written and compelling. The story is primarily an insight into the mind of the principal character and how she seems to come to terms with what has happened to her. I liked the bit of ambiguity at the end, too. What did surprise me was that I did not realize until I read it for the third time that there was almost no direct interaction between the principal character and any other character.

I hope that Mr. Creek will not wait another ten years for his next offering.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My only complaint is that it was too short! I loved the part where she finally noticed herself and was taken aback and unsure. Would love to see her keep growing!

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