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The Overflowing Bra

Tieryn
Lucy's Life Changing Shower (Revised)
An updated version of "Lucy's Life Changing Shower" with a few added bits. 
As before, Lucy buys a new kind of body wash that has... unexpected results.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Excellent short story!
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