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The Mardi Gras Debacle (Illustrated) OWA-6
"Our Wild Adventures" Part 6.  Posted at TOB by reader request.  This is the sad story of how everything went wrong with Annie at Mardi Gras, and how she and her expanding big tits betrayed my trust.  (Very long)  Thanks to everyone who has enjoyed this saga.  This story is third from the end.  
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Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Hi there,I came across your site and rlealy like this Mardi Gras mask picture:I run a small events space in Brooklyn, NY that's having a Mardi Gras party and I was wondering if I could use the picture in our flyer. All the proceeds from the party go toward paying rent and bills for the space and also toward our efforts to become a not-for-profit organization.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

Same stuff. Nothing new. The writer shows very little evolution.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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