Synopsis: A bored stranger plays a game with a couple in a mall. First shared story. Feedback welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.44
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 3.44
- Technical: 4.22
a
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
great, love mutual growth
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the mutual growth going on in this story. I find too many authors leave out the male in these kinds of stories, which is a shame. My only regret is that it was too short -- liked to read the next chapter when they put these fantastic bodies to work.
Daichi Azure
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Overall this wasn't that bad, but the changes that were done could of been a bit more drawn out to give them more detail and how they reacted to the sudden changes
czar
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like it. I always like a stranger playing fun games on people. Its a fun read and is well written
aitchbee
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good addition to the "unnamed man uses reality-altering powers to toy with people" genre. I hope we get to read about more games this stranger plays.
BimboLover
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
An excellent story. Great the way they were both sexualized. Given your skill and style, I'd love to see something a little longer.
SomeGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
ZS
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed this, and I'm not even into bimbo. Thanks!
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