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The Overflowing Bra

Seeder Part 2
Here's my second pass, this time focusing on our non-futa friend. 

I tried to make it a good deal longer before submitting. It still includes the first part as well. I have some more written but didn't want to upload a half finished chapter. 

I hope you enjoy it! I also just wanted to take a moment to thank some of my favorite OFB authors for the inspiration to finally write some smut, especially: 

Mich, FrigOfFury, Kodos, Cheviot, XXXecil, The Light Fantastic. 
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Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Hot, just oh so very very hot. Please write more.

The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Flattery won't get you anywhere ;)

No, seriously, keep it up - it's very enjoyable! The only thing I could suggest is more description of the transformations, rather than going into fugue states.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Definitely fun and exciting. I'm Looking forward to more.

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