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A man reminisces on the extraordinary life and times of a friend at her funeral.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I agree with the person before me. I would like to see a story like that as well.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A bit more description of the growth itself would have been nice, but your writing style is excellent! I'd love to see you tackle a story involving young girls going through an early puberty... no sex of course, but there's a real lack of "growth due to puberty" stories... especially ones where the girls get real big within a real short timeframe.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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