A young woman nicknamed 'Night' travels across the ocean to take control of an inherited dairy farm. Unfortunately the bank has auctioned almost the entire herd to pay off outstanding loans and she'll have to take extreme measures to meet contractual obligations. Author's note: A reader of the original Onabreeder story posted on this site requested a follow-up in a similar vein using the reader's character and incorporating some more/different fetishes. It has even more (and more extreme) BE, so hopefully other readers will enjoy this story at least as much as Onabreeder.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic! One of the best stories on this site! Do yourself a favor and read this one!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Pobblebonk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great rollicking story with some well rounded characters and lots of fucking and transformations. I wasn't familiar with the setting but it's been written well enough that prior knowledge isn't necessary.
I didn't see any issues with spelling or grammar other than a couple of instances where the character names were misspelled eg. Demona.
Well worth a read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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