The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The One Mile Circle
Prose That Blows story entry.
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Mr Justaguy
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

You have real writing talent, as a BE story however this short fails. It's just to damn short and the BE content is minor at best.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 5

Thanks for nothing

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