This was a story I found on a site dedicated to female erotic competition, and since I always loved the idea of women competing with each other about the size of their breasts, I added some BE elements as well.
I should cross post it in the original forum as well.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.80
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun story. I'm not sure the first half and the second half really jive together; I might have preferred to see the growth sequences and the boobfight as separate stories, or have some smaller-stakes boobfights earlier to knit things together. Regardless, a fun read!
Gnarl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love the concept! You did good man, keep it up.
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Jesus God! GREAT story, loved the characters. Please, next chapter! I give it a 7 for enjoyment!
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great writing style! I really enjoy this. Personally I think it was great up until the actually boob-fighting itself... I loved the description of the young girls developing their breasts. To be honest, I think it's something that's not on here very much (due to people being oversensitive about the young girls... but if there's no sex it's fine by me) and I'd love to see another story like this, maybe with a better focus on the BE itself!
Belinda
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written story, even if it wasn't entirely your own.
I hope you write your own someday
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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