The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Vitruvian
Since I've had some hints about putting more expansion in stories, here's one that's all expansion. There's a minor amount of 'world building' that can safely be ignored.

Sadly, there's not any 'real' sex in it (mainly kissing and groping), though I could tack something on the end, if people really want it. But then it wouldn't be expansion.

Just an experiment in getting a woman's point of view, and a different way of doing it. Have fun
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Miss Lany
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

The story had a good setup and clearly a lot of thought put into the setting and characters. The actual BE wasn't described much and the story ended before much could be done with it, but it was a nice story for a quick BE if that's what someone wants.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good story. I haven't seen much better, but I feel it's not quite 5 star material. I don't know why.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great combination of magical BE and alternate history. Loved the reference to the song title "She Blinded Me with Science"!

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