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The Overflowing Bra

Theresa Trinkets
I am going to try some new ideas for an illustrated story series.  Written and illustrated by me!  Let me know what you think, I believe illustrated stories are quite popular!
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I totally agree with Miss Lany

Miss Lany
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

I've seen worse drawings, but that single drawing isn't gonna sell me on more stories like these. It was short, bare minimum establishment of the character, premise, and expansion, leaving very little in the end.

It's nice to see something new on the site with the drawing, but hopefully you put a little more effort if you make anything else.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

i am not expecting A master piece, but it is like you were not even trying, and your art needs work, you can't just draw a quick drawing, and put some underwhelming story and call it an illustrated story.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

The description of the BE was a little lax... and the reaction of the character a little lacking. It would have been great to see her act like a real character would if their boobs had randomly started growing! There just didn't seem to be any suspense in it for me.

A little short, as well.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I agree with 4shot, however I also think that you should've at least made her want to see if they would shrink again, can't imagine if she'd want that permanently I mean mostly ofcourse so she can feel the expansion again :P

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It was just too short for straight 5's. Please keep going!

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