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Fantasies Put to Paper 2 - In Dreams What May Come (part 1)
Second part in my possibly endless series. I wanted to get this full story posted tonight, but it turned out being alot longer than my first story, so I decided to do 2 parts. This is a huge teaser for the main event, and I apologize. If you want the full story, Youll just have to comment on this story and my previous one. I need feedback to know Im on the right track. Be brutally honest in comments please.
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